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Crudely Crafted Characters by Matt McGuirk

Misshapen forms scrawled across the Trex decking in late afternoon:

a green outlined jack-o-lantern wishing it was ripe

with a mouth hoping for some replacement teeth,

an oversized white owl

that would form a ghost in the night sky

and a purple monkey that smiled with a snarling set of teeth

not belonging to this world.


As if from under the deck,

but out of our crude drawings they rose

sending two-dimensional vision

to three-dimensional life.

The jack-o-lantern sprouted stem first and squatted near the railing.

The owl’s wings spread and it perched, the size of an eagle, on the eave of the house

and the purple monkey sprung arms, legs and a tail and

pulled at the gutters in creeks and cracks.


I wondered about our creations with the beasts sitting there

and the clouds crowded in from the west.

The jack-o-lantern’s innocent need for dentures

began to look like s sinister tooth lessness,

the owl turned from a simple etching

to a bird of prey that was in need of more than a mouse or two

and the monkey’s smile gnashed as he dropped from the gutters

blocking our entrance and exit

and leaving us with the darkening sky.


We jumped stairs two by two

and sprinted down the driveway,

while yellow chalk zigzags cut across black skies.

The driveway edged with white chalk

and we disappeared into crudely drawn trees

with green rounded tops; chased into the night by

large open wings,

rustling branches

and the sound of a wheel across the gravel drive

when there wasn’t one.


Originally published by Sparrow's Trombone 2021


Matt McGuirk teaches and lives with his family in New Hampshire. He’s a BOTN 2021 nominee. His debut collection with Alien Buddha Press called Daydreams, Obsessions, Realities is on Amazon. His second collection, Oil Stains Like Rorschachs will be released soon with Anxiety Press. http://linktr.ee/McGuirkMatthew Twitter: @McguirkMatthew Instagram: @mcguirk_matthew.

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